Script First Draft from original Idea

'Heist' First Draft Script



FADE IN FROM BLACK

 

FLASH from different scenes of the robbery non-diagetic music is playing starting off from silent to eventually get louder-

 

J-

In, Out, no casualties, just success.

 

Still keep the flashing of scenes effect going but character says dialogue a little quicker- 

 

J-

In, Out, no casualties, just success.

 

Still keep the flashing of scenes effect going but character says dialogue even faster than before-

 

J-

In, Out, no casualties, just success.

 

A SHOTof a gun is heard leaving silence.

J-

Hello?

 

K-

It’s K are you alright you haven’t called to talk about it?

 

J-

Leave me alone

All of the following are QUICK CUTS 

The dropping of a gun flashes onto the screen

The character of J takes of his mask and throws it to the floor Angrily this once again FADES in and FADES out

FADE in J falling down to a seat in his house then proceeds to run his hands up and down his face (it is night time)

Screen then FADES and FADES back into J washing his face quick cuts to represent flashbacks showing a gun lowered then, the screen then DISTORTS leaving voices.

We see J immediately wake up to his flashback of the gun being raised and is met with the SOUND of a ringing phone.

FADE into J on top of someone beating them down screaming in anger.

 

Screen FADES to black

 

M-

I have a couple more jobs for you.

 

J-

I told you I’m done have you forgotten what i did?

M-

Oh you will do what i say if you ever want your secret to be kept from that loving family who are missing someone from their family photos, because of your actions.

 

The character of J then picks up his mask and pulls it over his head screen FADES to black

 

J then in a depressed muzzled voice says.

 

J-

In, Out, no casualties, just success.

 

QUICK CUTS of the robbery fading in and out once again J

 

J-

In, Out, no casualties, just success.

QUICK CUTS of the robbery fading in and out once again J this time of a different robbery and with a more depressed voice

J-

In, Out, no casualties, just success.

 

Screen then FADES TO BLACK quick cut of a phone ringing and J is sleeping

 

J-

I told you I’m done why can’t you just accept that.

 

 

M-

Oh we are far from done.

 

QUICK CUTS of action fading in and out but a lot quicker, which then stays on a black screen

 

J then says in a focused voice

 

J-



In, Out, no casualties, just success.