Video Editing Test 2- Guys on the phone

I wanted this short film assignment to be something like a Vine video where the video has a small narrative but at the end it just ends ridiculously, i thought that doing this video this way would let me experiment with the use of quick cuts and applying text into the video. For some reason the video goes on longer than it should and has about a minute and a half of a black screen which is a problem with the upload.